1) Which would be the best TITLE to add to the essay? a) Untitled Essay b) College Athletics c) College Athletes: Show Them the Money! d) Do You Like Sports? 2) Which would be the best HOOK to add to the essay? a) Hello! I am writing to tell you about college athletes. b) Have you ever played a college sport? c) Why do college coaches make so much money? d) Imagine working 40 hours a week or more and never getting paid! 3) Which is the best revision of the sentence: The coach can cut them from the team, and they can lose their scholarship. a) The coach is like the athletes' boss; they can cut them if they underperform, which can affect their scholarship. b) The coach can cut them if they aren't playing well. c) Athletes can lose their scholarship if they don't perform well. d) They can get kicked out of school if they are doing bad. 4) Which is the best revision of the sentence: First of all, college athletes work a lot. a) First, they work hard. b) First of all, college athletes work extremely hard in the classroom and in on the court or field. c) First of all, they work hard in school and sports. d) First, some athletes work hard, but some of them are lazy. 5) Which is the best revision of the sentence: At the end of the day, schools spend a lot of money on nice things. a) At the end of the day, anyone who works should get paid. b) At the end of the day, schools spend money on stuff, but don't pay the players. c) At the end of the day, schools have money for fancy training facilities, charter jets to away games, and state-of-the-art arenas. d) At the end of the day, schools should spend money on things but not what is important. 6) Which is the best revision of the sentence: How can colleges get away with this? a) If indentured servitude ended in 1917, how can colleges get away with treating their athletes like slaves in 2024? b) How can schools get away with doing this without getting in trouble? c) Why would athletes let schools get away with this? d) If I were an athlete, I wouldn't let them do this to me.

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